Can't Cloak My Emotions, Can't Mask My Tears (Top Ten)

[Vaarna_Aarne]

Alrighty, uploading.

 

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[Stereotypical Villain]

I feel like killing myself.

 

[laclongquan]

This feels lacking somehow... I dont know what.

 

[Vaarna_Aarne]

I know:

Alan Moore

 

[Unkillable Cat]

It's not as bad as I thought, but yes, it's lacking something.

The big reveal about who the Pilgrim's identity was just stupid, though.

 

[laclongquan]

There should be some story-thread twined the ex-captain with some other crimes just to make it exciting, plus the blue-pair finding the new house. The final scene of that sequence is lacking climax... make it like a filler.

 

[Vaarna_Aarne]

Yea, it's the fact the dialogue and situations don't have the Alan Moore touch. Moore is one of the best writers in history when it comes to writing human characters and life-like dialogue.

Personally I didn't like the slightly hamfisted Patriot Act commentary.

 

[laclongquan]

That bugger is archetypical but has no character. Strange, I know, but there it is. i imagine a few lines at his fighting scenes, and some other, might add more depth to his profile.

 

[Vaarna_Aarne]

Yea, we never really get anything out of the short-lived new captain except that he's a war veteran of some kind and a generic hardass who wanks to regulation.

 

[Brother None]

The big reveal about who the Pilgrim's identity was just stupid, though.

His identity itself is ok, but it lacks all build-up and intelligence in plot structure.

But to then cop out and have him defeated by the least interesting character because she has hope in a box is beyond pathetic.

 

[Unkillable Cat]

Yeah, especially since it's been established quite a while ago that Pandora's "box" was actually a large jar.

 

[Vaarna_Aarne]

Still, I'd say the problem is that the writer really can't pull off 90% of the returning cast properly.

 

[SoupNazi]

Yeah, it felt like they were all completely different people who just seem to look a like to the actual characters. Also, not enough Smax. Though with the of his character in Moore's last entry, it's probably for the better...