kingcomrade
Kingcomrade
A little belated but the new writing is greatly superior to the originals. I'm glad your writer figured out brevity and dropped most of the overly extravagant prose.
Roqua said:I hate to sound like a big gay idiot (which as we all know is impossible), but the critisism of the writing is getting very tiresome. It was good before, its better now, lets finish this bitch while I still kind of like playing video games at all.
Everyone's fabulous showing of how awesomer they would've been as an editor is neat and all, but shut the fuck up, you candy ass pussies. I would much rather have a game with a couple minor flaws now, than a game with a couple less flaws in 2009. What a bunch of crybaby, knitpicky bitches.
Or, I'll give you $50 if you let me beta test what you have now, and I get to download a free copy in 2011 when it goes gold. But wait, inflation might make $50 worth a lot less so far in the future, so I'll just rebuy it with all the updated graphics and words.
kingcomrade said:A little belated but the new writing is greatly superior to the originals. I'm glad your writer figured out brevity and dropped most of the overly extravagant prose.
You must've missed the first post in the thread. There you go!One Wolf said:kingcomrade said:A little belated but the new writing is greatly superior to the originals. I'm glad your writer figured out brevity and dropped most of the overly extravagant prose.
what makes you think he figured out brevity and dropped the extravagant prose?
Care to give an example? Because I still ain't sure I quite understand. What is "VD's edit" referring to?kingcomrade said:I was trying to say that a lot of the overly intricate constructions, as if the author was trying too hard to create complex prose, was cut in VD's edit and left just enough for it to be interesting with having the wanna-be extravagance shoved down my throat. I was trying to say that the writing had become simpler and better (hence brevity).
Vault Dweller said:Sure.
Before:
Does your have a quests for me, kind sir?
After:
Do ur haev quests lol kthxby?
Still too much text. You're making role-playing, not role-reading game, aren't you?Vault Dweller said:After:
Do ur haev quests lol kthxby?