Safav Hamon
Self-Ejected
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- May 15, 2018
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Summary of the responses in the last thread:
- Yes the writing style is very amateurish
- Yes it tries way too hard to be deep and philosophical with little success
- Yes it's extremely verbose and requires several editing passes to trim down redundancy
- Yes it come across as pretentious and preachy at times
- You are an idiot for saying any of this means it has bad writing
- No, the characters aren't intelligent. They are blatant in how they subvert tropes. Their personalities have little depth beyond their basic attributes, and their psuedo-philosophical beliefs never adequately supported.
- No, the themes are not great. They are never expanded beyond a surface level, and are therefore very shallow. One of the trashiest parts of the writing is how Planescape keeps ramming its half-assed themes down your throat.
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