Luzur
Good Sir
To be fair it does slightly edge out starting out the story with a gathering in the local inn.This reads like someone's RPG Maker project.
Also, "so the day has finally come, (name). It's time for you to start your (whatever) trials" has got to be the most boring way to start an RPG.
Has there ever been a start like that since Eye of the Beholder 2?