Double Ogre said:
I've been following a few threads on the ITS forums, and I've noticed that AoD has piss poor writing... Bad writing is inexcusable in a C&C heavy RPG.
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Also, the fact that other aspects of the game (graphics, combat, etc) are crudely done doesn't help it either.
Hmm... let's see... bad writing, bad graphics, crudely done combat. Is it that time of the month again, Ogre? You should team up with
Sir Brennus and do a double act.
If this won't be changed until the release, I don't think I'll be interested in a purchase.
It won't be fixed. If my writing (more like my personality, but let's pretend that it's about writing) rubs you the wrong way, forget about AoD and focus on some other game.
PrzeSzkoda said:
I wonder why on Earth he doesn't WANT to hire a professional editor. It's supposed to be a writing-heavy game, the writing should be one of the main selling points. Currently the writing is somewhat better than all of 'em cheap-labor Russian>English localizations we get (like, say, Space Rangers 2), and that's definitely not good enough. It's got the word "amateur" stamped on its forehead.
I humbly disagree. The writing will never be described as great or brilliant, but it's good enough. Good enough to attract a lot of interest and quite a few publishing inquiries. Considering that 95% of screens we've posted are dialogue screens, if the writing was as bad as you imply we would have had empty forums and 0 interest from the gaming audience, press, and publishers.
And don't get me started on the "but we already had a re-write, and you said it sucked!" thing. I bet Scott, the Cyclopean dude, was responsible for the re-write (the unnecessary verbosity of it being a dead giveaway)....
Nope.
Twinfalls said:
OgreOgre said:
Bad writing is inexcusable in a C&C heavy RPG.
Could you show some examples from AoD of what you consider to be bad writing please? I'm curious about this, I think there's an important line to tread between improvement and preserving VD's individual style against the generic.
The voice of reason, which sadly was ignored.
kwanzabot said:
Twinfalls said:
OgreOgre said:
Bad writing is inexcusable in a C&C heavy RPG.
Could you show some examples from AoD of what you consider to be bad writing please? I'm curious about this, I think there's an important line to tread between improvement and preserving VD's individual style against the generic.
Honestly, if you can't see the poor writing from AOD you have no grasp on the english language and I would have to call you a fucking idiot.
The writing is piss poor whether you would like to ignore it or not.
A trolling alt on the Codex? How original and fascinating.
vazquez595654 said:
AoD needs help in the writing.
It is too modern, simplistic, 1 dimensional, and reads like a 14 year old's writing.
Quite a statement.
obediah said:
That all sounds nice, but if I were AoD I'd invoke the Bioware excuse. "That's real nice, but it would take a fuckload of time to implement that we'd rather spend on stuff we like."
If it was actually true, if my writing was simplistic, one-dimensional, and that of a 14 year old, I would have found a writer and taken the time to do it right.
Jasede said:
You should take this offer, VD.
Because someone said that the dialogues suck? Seriously?
There are a lot more people who think that the writing is good enough than people who agree with Ogre and Vasquez. For example (quick search results; was looking for people with dual "citizenship"):
Annie: I’m impressed with the dialogue...
Cardtrick: Loved it; awesome dialogs. Moar! I love the way the dialog looks with the quotes, too; this game is reminding me a lot more of PS:T than I expected it to. Honestly, I was expecting great choices/consequences and fun Fallout-esque gameplay, but I'm continually impressed by the quality of the writing, which I think seems to surpass Fallout's.
John Yossarian: Maybe Vince can give it a try, his writing is always top notch.
Star: Your writing is great VD, love it.
One Wolf: That being said, the dialog looks truly fantastic. I can't wait to play.
Jora: ...and great dialogues.
Scott: I like the writing.
Overall, I'm under the impression that the overwhelming majority either likes the writing or doesn't see anything wrong with it.
Glad we had this talk.